Book Launch after I won the Dundee International Book Prize
I need a pat on the back. Why? Well I wrote The End on my
work in progress. It’s finished. Completed. I’ve written the final chapter, and
even better, the final sentence. And I must say there was a wee tear in my eye
as I wrote it.
Tears! From a dark crime writer! What next? Well, even
though my books are not renowned for happy endings, I do have a soft side. I’m
sure I’ll be deafened by the mutterings out there when this is read. But I do,
honestly. And, although my crime books may not have very many happy endings,
things do work out. Anyway, would you really want a happy ending to a dark
crime book?
Once I stopped dancing because I had written The End, I had
to knuckle down to some more work. You see, when a writer writes The End to
their work in progress, it’s not really the end. Next comes the hard work of
revision, editing and proofing, and I do all that before it goes out to my
editors for fresh eyes to look at.
Revision comes first. The entire manuscript is read, and while
reading I am looking out for clumsy writing, places where I’ve told the story
rather than showed the action, although there are places where telling is okay.
If I reach a tell section, I consider it. Would it be better if I turned it
into show, or should I leave it the way it is? A lot depends on what is
happening in the story at that point. If it’s a fast paced section then there
is no argument – it has to be show. But tell is great if you want a quick way
to sketch in background or move the story through time. However, given that the
action in the new book takes place over a period of 6 days, time gallops.
Then, there is the hunt for weasel words. That is, words
that are unnecessary, words where the sentence would make the same sense if
they weren’t there. I’m thinking about words like – just, that, actually,
basically, extremely, almost, simply – there are loads more, including the word
‘then’ which starts this paragraph, and the Find command in Word is excellent
for rooting them out. However, each word has to be considered before removal,
because in some cases they are needed.
Then a hunt for quotation marks. Word’s Find command is
great here too, but this is laborious, and you only realize how many you use
when you search them out. So what am I looking for? I’m checking that dialogue
is both opened and closed, and that apostrophes are in the correct place.
Speaking of apostrophes, I also do a find on words like ‘its’ just in case it’s
the one that needs the apostrophe. Then there’s the hunt for ise, and ize
endings to ensure the correct one is written. I use the Oxford Dictionary for
Writers & Editors, and they stipulate the correct usage for words that can
be written either way. Their preference is for ize endings, with some
exceptions, for example, ‘realize’ is an ize ending but ‘surprise’ is an ise
ending. However, as I have a tendency to use the ise endings in preference to
ize, this means hunting out every ise ending and converting it if it’s needed.
I’m getting better though, because when I’m writing my brain has become trained
to write ize instead of ise.
After that, another read through is needed before it goes
out to my editors. And that’s where the book is at the moment. And, of course,
another read through once the corrections are in, then a speak aloud read
through – it’s amazing the errors you can detect when you read the manuscript
aloud, although after 92,000 words I reckon I’ll be hoarse!
Oh, nearly forgot to say, the cover has been commissioned,
but I have no idea what it will look like yet. I’m waiting for my cover artist
to surprise me.
I suppose you want to know what the book is about, but I’ll
leave that until later. What I will tell you though, is that it is the third
one in the Dundee Crime Series, and I should be ready to launch it in early
July.
Watch this space!
